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Dilz ft. Eedee - "When Clouds Gather"

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Post by Eedee Thu May 09, 2013 9:00 am



Dilz and I did this song recently. Lyrics are in the video itself. Dilz ft. Eedee - "When Clouds Gather" 424776184
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Post by Mr. DGAF Thu May 09, 2013 9:18 am

Your flow/delivery on the second verse is fucking sick. Dilz you did a nice job, you've got awesome lyrics. Just gotta focus on delivery and flow a bit. Sometimes you lag off the beat, sometimes you are ahead too. It's something you'll get in time for sure, I know you went for the faster flow and most of the time you nailed it. Just a few slip ups.

Good shit from both, I liked this a lot.
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Post by reneesmith Thu May 09, 2013 11:25 am

Nice one!

Get your flows a bit tighter, though.
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Post by RockOut Thu May 09, 2013 2:05 pm

Sounds pretty good.
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Post by punchy Thu May 09, 2013 4:07 pm

those kiwis know how to spit

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Post by FxTDilz Thu May 09, 2013 9:37 pm

Haha didn't even know this was on these forums, thanks for the feedback people. and yea this was my first time attempting to do a faster rap lol, so definitely had mistakes in it but yea thanks

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Post by Alexus2267 Fri May 10, 2013 11:10 am

wow this is hella nice

you guys are awesome

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Post by Eedee Fri May 10, 2013 11:35 am

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Post by BobbyD Fri May 10, 2013 12:05 pm

good shit

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Post by RapNut Fri May 10, 2013 12:23 pm

wow you guys have good chemistry

dilz's flow is all over the place tho

the vocal mixing is ok the beat is a bit badly mixed tho
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Post by Eedee Fri May 10, 2013 12:24 pm

Yeah I think Dilz took that beat straight from YouTube.

My guess is the guy who made it didn't fully master the instrumental lol. It's really loud.
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Post by RapNut Fri May 10, 2013 12:35 pm

naw the beat is mastered too much the beat has way too much compression and the beat itself its mixed poorly because the pianos overpower everything on a huge scale
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Post by Eedee Fri May 10, 2013 1:23 pm

Word.

Not the best of beats lol
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Post by FxTDilz Fri May 10, 2013 2:57 pm

RapNut wrote:wow you guys have good chemistry

dilz's flow is all over the place tho

the vocal mixing is ok the beat is a bit badly mixed tho

I said just a few posts ago that this was my first attempt at trying a fast rap, don't see why my flow needs to be brought up again when i've already replied about it

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Post by andrewwarhead Fri May 10, 2013 5:06 pm

pretty good song

the vocals get swallowed a lot from the chaos that is the beat

one thing I liked was when the beat cut out on eedee's verse

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Post by Eedee Fri May 10, 2013 5:11 pm

andrewwarhead wrote:pretty good song

the vocals get swallowed a lot from the chaos that is the beat

one thing I liked was when the beat cut out on eedee's verse

Hue hue hue. I love doing that kind of shit. Pulls the listener in.
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Post by RapNut Fri May 10, 2013 5:13 pm

FxTDilz wrote:
RapNut wrote:wow you guys have good chemistry

dilz's flow is all over the place tho

the vocal mixing is ok the beat is a bit badly mixed tho

I said just a few posts ago that this was my first attempt at trying a fast rap, don't see why my flow needs to be brought up again when i've already replied about it
sorry bro I didn't read lol

its not like it was god awful or anything, you don't need to prove yourself tbh because I've listened to most of your stuff
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Post by mdemaz Sat May 11, 2013 9:23 am

RapNut wrote:
FxTDilz wrote:
RapNut wrote:wow you guys have good chemistry

dilz's flow is all over the place tho

the vocal mixing is ok the beat is a bit badly mixed tho

I said just a few posts ago that this was my first attempt at trying a fast rap, don't see why my flow needs to be brought up again when i've already replied about it
sorry bro I didn't read lol

its not like it was god awful or anything, you don't need to prove yourself tbh because I've listened to most of your stuff
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