Precision's Thank You

I started out as WordSmith, rappin bout the problems in my life
Then the world switched, now it seems like everything is right
Found an outlet, something to get out that
Anger that I had at the world, now I'll come back
Stronger than before, man I'll never feel depression at my door
And what's more is my rap career is on the first floor
Time to raise it, I'm done with treading water, I'm ashore
Got a crew that has my back when I call 'em into war
There's Mike Hawk, always watchin my back with telescopic eyes
And for the life of me, I'll make sure you reach the top and touch the skies
I'll get you there myself if I have to because man you deserve it
You've wanted this your whole life and goddamnit you've earned it
You were a brother to me when I had no family to call on
And for that you are King, don't ever settle to be a pawn
Your voice is angelic, a fucking modern relic
And the chance to make music with you is fucking psychedelic
And Eedee my friend, I'll follow you to the end
It's due to you that this notebook is full of lyrics I've penned
And I commend you for that, that you'd decide to descend
From on high with Matt Demaz to help me transcend
So I'll defend you through all the wrong that's running through your life
Fuck the strife, man I'll cut through it like a motherfucking knife
Yeah that's right, I got your back, I'm your Personal Army
And I know your enemies will think this verse is alarming
I'll slice and dice, goddamn man I'll fucking decapitate
With sharp words bitch I know these lyrics'll captivate
And enthrall, leave 'em crawling on the ground to kiss our feet
We're elite, there's no opposition that we can't defeat
We'll beat 'em down through the ground, we'll fucking send 'em to hell
In the Emergency Room they'll tell the doctors they fell.

I already told you what I thought of this yo. Good shit.

We're recording this tomorrow btw.

Gonna be sick. I got a third verse for it as well.

The GOAT is strong in this one.

That was pretty solid.

Can't see any structural errors on first and second glance.

Interesting wordplay and poetic elements.

That was fucking dope.

Uplifting, powerful and well structured.

This is the type of music i like and can relate to, Positive mind set type music, knowing you are strong enough to overcome negative aspects.

this whole thing is dope man, love it