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Eedee - "So Lonely" (Prod. by RiseFromTheAshez)

Post by Eedee on Sun Mar 25, 2012 9:24 pm

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^ Just hit play on "So Lonely" under 'All Songs'!

* After review from that Get Ready EP, I worked on delivery/voice and flow. Hopefully it's a step up from that. Enjoy!


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[Intro]

[Verse1]
I let you in, where you carved a lie,
You sent me through a loop, which is part of why
I fucking hate your life, it's a part of my reason,
Why I wanna just die in the dark, despite treason,
You said you loved me, I fell for it with gusto,
You must've died inside 'cuz your eyes don't tell much
so you just go and fucking rip me apart,
If your love was an iceberg, the tip doesn't start
it wasn't hard to fall for you, I thought you were perfect,
I didn't deserve it but with you it was worth it.
whenever you text me, my heart skipped a beat,
You lifted me up but I just didn't see,
you went and go drop me on a filthy street,
and as you walk away I had tears on my cheeks.
I sat there cryin' for weeks after weeks,
I had dark thoughts, death creeped after me.

[Verse 2]
I had your heart, I fucking kept it's light,
You sent a hex this time, that's death defined.
Grab the next breath as I was flexing my love,
You said you had the best in mind, exit sign above.
You never wanted me did you? onto the next in line,
haunted the nights in my dreams where I checked, it's fine.
I wasn't shit to you, you put me below God,
That doesn't fit the truth, on the level with dogs.
It was almost a year, then you let me go,
Never did get to know why I was put in the scopes.
You always hinted with you I was next to the truth,
You shoved religion down my throat and I accepted it too!
I just wanted to be with you, how fucking hard
is it to accept who I am or move on to another heart?
But you chose to choose me, you said I was important,
didn't know you could lose me, so I'm making this recording!

You went away...
Didn't get to say...
Love left in me...
Can rest in peace...

[Verse 3]
You owe it to me, to tell me where I went wrong,
I was your track one and you left on to the next song.
I was cursed, you fuckin' left your hex on,
You made my entire trust of the opposite sex gone.
I'm slowly regaining it, but after what you did,
I could just imagine your laughter, but truth is,
You ruined it, you're lucky I didn't pull a Kim,
We could've been together forever, we should've been,
But your faith blinded you, no use fightin' you,
No denying you, this pierces like a lion's tooth,
I'm crying, you're gone, I just gotta get over it,
If your love was a crashed car, you're flooring it
away from the scene of the crime, I don't blame you,
the games you played left me in shock, I HATE YOU!
I'm so lonely and it's your fault, so thanks for nothing,
We grow only when life is a marathon, the race is coming....

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Post by mdemaz on Mon Mar 26, 2012 12:52 am

YES, good shit dude.

This is very nice bro.
The aggression is fucking brutal.

I liked how your voice reaches a high tone and it goes BOOM, you know?
Anyway, keep doing songs like this dude.

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Re: Eedee - "So Lonely" (Prod. by RiseFromTheAshez)

Post by davidgarcia on Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:16 am

What Demaz said, quality vocals on this track.
The only thing that saddens me is the lack of layering.

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Post by Eedee on Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:54 am

mdemaz wrote:YES, good shit dude.

This is very nice bro.
The aggression is fucking brutal.

I liked how your voice reaches a high tone and it goes BOOM, you know?
Anyway, keep doing songs like this dude.

Good. Glad you liked it. I definitely will.

davidgarcia wrote:What Demaz said, quality vocals on this track.
The only thing that saddens me is the lack of layering.

I layered the third verse just to see how that went. I didn't want the whole track to sound jumbled, and I just wanted raw emotional vocals for this one. Wouldn't layering kinda make it seem like I'm trying to cover up lack of delivery?

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Post by reneesmith on Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:00 am

Well done son, you are on the right track!

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Post by davidgarcia on Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:09 am

Eedee wrote:
mdemaz wrote:YES, good shit dude.

This is very nice bro.
The aggression is fucking brutal.

I liked how your voice reaches a high tone and it goes BOOM, you know?
Anyway, keep doing songs like this dude.

Good. Glad you liked it. I definitely will.

davidgarcia wrote:What Demaz said, quality vocals on this track.
The only thing that saddens me is the lack of layering.

I layered the third verse just to see how that went. I didn't want the whole track to sound jumbled, and I just wanted raw emotional vocals for this one. Wouldn't layering kinda make it seem like I'm trying to cover up lack of delivery?
Sometimes it's good if you have layering whilst maintaining the delivery, it shows skills, but you know...

Demaz has the second layer at half the volume of the first, so the vocals don't sound jumbled...
But, do your thing man, I'm sorry I was a bit harsh when I reviewed your EP, I found out how old you are and for your age, you did really good, so yeah...

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Re: Eedee - "So Lonely" (Prod. by RiseFromTheAshez)

Post by mdemaz on Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:12 am

davidgarcia wrote:
Eedee wrote:
mdemaz wrote:YES, good shit dude.

This is very nice bro.
The aggression is fucking brutal.

I liked how your voice reaches a high tone and it goes BOOM, you know?
Anyway, keep doing songs like this dude.

Good. Glad you liked it. I definitely will.

davidgarcia wrote:What Demaz said, quality vocals on this track.
The only thing that saddens me is the lack of layering.

I layered the third verse just to see how that went. I didn't want the whole track to sound jumbled, and I just wanted raw emotional vocals for this one. Wouldn't layering kinda make it seem like I'm trying to cover up lack of delivery?
Sometimes it's good if you have layering whilst maintaining the delivery, it shows skills, but you know...

Demaz has the second layer at half the volume of the first, so the vocals don't sound jumbled...
But, do your thing man, I'm sorry I was a bit harsh when I reviewed your EP, I found out how old you are and for your age, you did really good, so yeah...
Cool story, bro.

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Re: Eedee - "So Lonely" (Prod. by RiseFromTheAshez)

Post by Eedee on Tue Mar 27, 2012 1:33 am

davidgarcia wrote:
Eedee wrote:
mdemaz wrote:YES, good shit dude.

This is very nice bro.
The aggression is fucking brutal.

I liked how your voice reaches a high tone and it goes BOOM, you know?
Anyway, keep doing songs like this dude.

Good. Glad you liked it. I definitely will.

davidgarcia wrote:What Demaz said, quality vocals on this track.
The only thing that saddens me is the lack of layering.

I layered the third verse just to see how that went. I didn't want the whole track to sound jumbled, and I just wanted raw emotional vocals for this one. Wouldn't layering kinda make it seem like I'm trying to cover up lack of delivery?
Sometimes it's good if you have layering whilst maintaining the delivery, it shows skills, but you know...

Demaz has the second layer at half the volume of the first, so the vocals don't sound jumbled...
But, do your thing man, I'm sorry I was a bit harsh when I reviewed your EP, I found out how old you are and for your age, you did really good, so yeah...

Bullshit, my age has nothing to do with it. Don't soften up with the critique just because I'm 17, that's bullshit. How will I ever learn my mistakes if you guys treat me like I'm a glass cup? Seriously, don't let up the harsh critiques - it's what I need to get better!

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Post by davidgarcia on Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:06 pm

I wasn't gonna soften up my critiques, I was just saying that you are doing good for your age, I hope you get better over time, but you are doing good for your age.

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Post by FallenAngel on Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:26 pm

David is a dumb fuck, just ignore him.

He thinks everything is shit.

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Post by RapNut on Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:41 pm

Well, I didn't really join this forum to listen to other rappers, but this song is sick.

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Post by jasonking on Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:42 pm

So yeah, cool song, hopefully you can master that delivery.
The growling and the yelling suits you a lot.

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Post by davidgarcia on Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:43 pm

RapNut wrote:Well, I didn't really join this forum to listen to other rappers, but this song is sick.
Eedee is practically part of Demaz Team now.

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Post by RapNut on Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:44 pm

davidgarcia wrote:
RapNut wrote:Well, I didn't really join this forum to listen to other rappers, but this song is sick.
Eedee is practically part of Demaz Team now.

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Post by Eedee on Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:51 pm

Well shit, glad this track is getting good looks! I'm scheduled in the studio tomorrow to finish up this newest EP for you guys, trying to get my voice/delivery down as well as flow. I think I have some good stuff for you, keep an eye open! (This song "So Lonely" is the single for that EP, the last one didn't have one, but I want this track to be it haha).

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Post by Eedee on Wed Mar 28, 2012 3:48 pm

Just an update: I've been thinking of re-recording the Get Ready EP and this new EP and putting those together with a few more songs (I have a total of 17 beats from this producer to use) so I'm thinking I'll make a 17 track LP. What do you guys think? Obviously it'll take some time, but would you rather have a new 4-5 track EP by this weekend or 17 track LP (well, 12 track, you've heard the Get Ready EP [Echoes will not be on there]) by either next weekend or the weekend after that? I want to make sure to appease my "fanbase" (you guys my fans? )

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Post by reneesmith on Sat Mar 31, 2012 2:14 pm

Yeah dude, go for it!

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Post by Eedee on Sat Mar 31, 2012 3:30 pm

reneesmith wrote:Yeah dude, go for it!

I'm going to the studio tomorrow to record some new tracks Smile Hopefully this album will be done soon, but I want it to sound the best it can possibly be, so don't be mad/sad/disappointed if it's not dropped soon. Hopefully early-mid April.

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Post by Eedee on Sun Apr 01, 2012 10:17 pm

For what it's worth, a new full length LP has been confirmed by me

It's called "New Beginning" - it has a total of 18 tracks (5 of which you've already heard, the Get Ready EP - but I WILL re-record/re-write to make them better and worthy of an album).

I'll be in the studio recording Tuesday, I've written all but 3 of them so far, but I've gotten a rush of creativity tonight, written 4 tracks already, so the other 3 shouldn't be too hard.

Hopefully it'll be out sometime in April, and hopefully you guys will enjoy it. I'll keep you posted - ask questions if you want to know more.

BTW - "So Lonely" is the first single off it. I like that one. Think it represents the album well.

Have a good one, guys.

PS - Mat, I've been avoiding Facebook recently because I added a guy who wants me to collab with him - he used a pella of mine from back in June of last year when I SUCKED and he wants it played on the radios and I don't want that and I don't want to talk to him anymore haha, I think I might delete him. I think I have my parts done with our 'thing', but tell me on here if I don't and I'll get on FB and try to work it all out. I'm sorry if I've been distant - still love ya, bro!

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Post by mdemaz on Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:33 pm

Yeah, I'm done mixing most of the tracks now, I'm gonna drop the tracks when I feel they are done completely.

Yeah, you still have to do a hook for the Stupid song, but I changed the beat for it, I'll send it to you when I'm done mixing my part.

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Post by Eedee on Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:58 pm

mdemaz wrote:Yeah, I'm done mixing most of the tracks now, I'm gonna drop the tracks when I feel they are done completely.

Yeah, you still have to do a hook for the Stupid song, but I changed the beat for it, I'll send it to you when I'm done mixing my part.

Good shit dude. It'll help me make a hook for it knowing what you spit on it, I was blanking out not knowing what you'd want on there. Smile

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Post by mdemaz on Mon Apr 02, 2012 5:41 pm

I'm gonna upload the album art tonight and then add some more shit to the intro and upload it.

The rest of the songs will drop like turds coming out of my ass.

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Post by Eedee on Tue Apr 03, 2012 9:04 am

mdemaz wrote:I'm gonna upload the album art tonight and then add some more shit to the intro and upload it.

The rest of the songs will drop like turds coming out of my ass.


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Post by RapNut on Wed Apr 04, 2012 7:53 pm

Hurry up Demaz.

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Post by jasonking on Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:44 am

Good looks, broham.

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