Eedee - "So Lonely" (Prod. by RiseFromTheAshez)

YES, good shit dude.

This is very nice bro.
The aggression is fucking brutal.

I liked how your voice reaches a high tone and it goes BOOM, you know?
Anyway, keep doing songs like this dude.

What Demaz said, quality vocals on this track.
The only thing that saddens me is the lack of layering.

mdemaz wrote:YES, good shit dude.

This is very nice bro.
The aggression is fucking brutal.

I liked how your voice reaches a high tone and it goes BOOM, you know?
Anyway, keep doing songs like this dude.

Good. Glad you liked it. I definitely will.

davidgarcia wrote:What Demaz said, quality vocals on this track.
The only thing that saddens me is the lack of layering.

I layered the third verse just to see how that went. I didn't want the whole track to sound jumbled, and I just wanted raw emotional vocals for this one. Wouldn't layering kinda make it seem like I'm trying to cover up lack of delivery?

Well done son, you are on the right track!

Eedee wrote:

mdemaz wrote:YES, good shit dude.

This is very nice bro.
The aggression is fucking brutal.

I liked how your voice reaches a high tone and it goes BOOM, you know?
Anyway, keep doing songs like this dude.

Good. Glad you liked it. I definitely will.

davidgarcia wrote:What Demaz said, quality vocals on this track.
The only thing that saddens me is the lack of layering.

I layered the third verse just to see how that went. I didn't want the whole track to sound jumbled, and I just wanted raw emotional vocals for this one. Wouldn't layering kinda make it seem like I'm trying to cover up lack of delivery?

Sometimes it's good if you have layering whilst maintaining the delivery, it shows skills, but you know...

Demaz has the second layer at half the volume of the first, so the vocals don't sound jumbled...
But, do your thing man, I'm sorry I was a bit harsh when I reviewed your EP, I found out how old you are and for your age, you did really good, so yeah...

davidgarcia wrote:

Eedee wrote:

mdemaz wrote:YES, good shit dude.

This is very nice bro.
The aggression is fucking brutal.

I liked how your voice reaches a high tone and it goes BOOM, you know?
Anyway, keep doing songs like this dude.

Good. Glad you liked it. I definitely will.

davidgarcia wrote:What Demaz said, quality vocals on this track.
The only thing that saddens me is the lack of layering.

I layered the third verse just to see how that went. I didn't want the whole track to sound jumbled, and I just wanted raw emotional vocals for this one. Wouldn't layering kinda make it seem like I'm trying to cover up lack of delivery?

Sometimes it's good if you have layering whilst maintaining the delivery, it shows skills, but you know...

Demaz has the second layer at half the volume of the first, so the vocals don't sound jumbled...
But, do your thing man, I'm sorry I was a bit harsh when I reviewed your EP, I found out how old you are and for your age, you did really good, so yeah...

Cool story, bro.

davidgarcia wrote:

Eedee wrote:

mdemaz wrote:YES, good shit dude.

This is very nice bro.
The aggression is fucking brutal.

I liked how your voice reaches a high tone and it goes BOOM, you know?
Anyway, keep doing songs like this dude.

Good. Glad you liked it. I definitely will.

davidgarcia wrote:What Demaz said, quality vocals on this track.
The only thing that saddens me is the lack of layering.

I layered the third verse just to see how that went. I didn't want the whole track to sound jumbled, and I just wanted raw emotional vocals for this one. Wouldn't layering kinda make it seem like I'm trying to cover up lack of delivery?

Sometimes it's good if you have layering whilst maintaining the delivery, it shows skills, but you know...

Demaz has the second layer at half the volume of the first, so the vocals don't sound jumbled...
But, do your thing man, I'm sorry I was a bit harsh when I reviewed your EP, I found out how old you are and for your age, you did really good, so yeah...

Bullshit, my age has nothing to do with it. Don't soften up with the critique just because I'm 17, that's bullshit. How will I ever learn my mistakes if you guys treat me like I'm a glass cup? Seriously, don't let up the harsh critiques - it's what I need to get better!

I wasn't gonna soften up my critiques, I was just saying that you are doing good for your age, I hope you get better over time, but you are doing good for your age.

David is a dumb fuck, just ignore him.

He thinks everything is shit.

Well, I didn't really join this forum to listen to other rappers, but this song is sick.

So yeah, cool song, hopefully you can master that delivery.
The growling and the yelling suits you a lot.

RapNut wrote:Well, I didn't really join this forum to listen to other rappers, but this song is sick.

Eedee is practically part of Demaz Team now.

davidgarcia wrote:

RapNut wrote:Well, I didn't really join this forum to listen to other rappers, but this song is sick.

Eedee is practically part of Demaz Team now.

Well shit, glad this track is getting good looks! I'm scheduled in the studio tomorrow to finish up this newest EP for you guys, trying to get my voice/delivery down as well as flow. I think I have some good stuff for you, keep an eye open! (This song "So Lonely" is the single for that EP, the last one didn't have one, but I want this track to be it haha).

Just an update: I've been thinking of re-recording the Get Ready EP and this new EP and putting those together with a few more songs (I have a total of 17 beats from this producer to use) so I'm thinking I'll make a 17 track LP. What do you guys think? Obviously it'll take some time, but would you rather have a new 4-5 track EP by this weekend or 17 track LP (well, 12 track, you've heard the Get Ready EP [Echoes will not be on there]) by either next weekend or the weekend after that? I want to make sure to appease my "fanbase" (you guys my fans? )

Yeah dude, go for it!

reneesmith wrote:Yeah dude, go for it!

I'm going to the studio tomorrow to record some new tracks Hopefully this album will be done soon, but I want it to sound the best it can possibly be, so don't be mad/sad/disappointed if it's not dropped soon. Hopefully early-mid April.

For what it's worth, a new full length LP has been confirmed by me

It's called "New Beginning" - it has a total of 18 tracks (5 of which you've already heard, the Get Ready EP - but I WILL re-record/re-write to make them better and worthy of an album).

I'll be in the studio recording Tuesday, I've written all but 3 of them so far, but I've gotten a rush of creativity tonight, written 4 tracks already, so the other 3 shouldn't be too hard.

Hopefully it'll be out sometime in April, and hopefully you guys will enjoy it. I'll keep you posted - ask questions if you want to know more.

BTW - "So Lonely" is the first single off it. I like that one. Think it represents the album well.

Have a good one, guys.

PS - Mat, I've been avoiding Facebook recently because I added a guy who wants me to collab with him - he used a pella of mine from back in June of last year when I SUCKED and he wants it played on the radios and I don't want that and I don't want to talk to him anymore haha, I think I might delete him. I think I have my parts done with our 'thing', but tell me on here if I don't and I'll get on FB and try to work it all out. I'm sorry if I've been distant - still love ya, bro!

Yeah, I'm done mixing most of the tracks now, I'm gonna drop the tracks when I feel they are done completely.

Yeah, you still have to do a hook for the Stupid song, but I changed the beat for it, I'll send it to you when I'm done mixing my part.

mdemaz wrote:Yeah, I'm done mixing most of the tracks now, I'm gonna drop the tracks when I feel they are done completely.

Yeah, you still have to do a hook for the Stupid song, but I changed the beat for it, I'll send it to you when I'm done mixing my part.

Good shit dude. It'll help me make a hook for it knowing what you spit on it, I was blanking out not knowing what you'd want on there.

I'm gonna upload the album art tonight and then add some more shit to the intro and upload it.

The rest of the songs will drop like turds coming out of my ass.

mdemaz wrote:I'm gonna upload the album art tonight and then add some more shit to the intro and upload it.

The rest of the songs will drop like turds coming out of my ass.

Hurry up Demaz.

Good looks, broham.