Eedee ft. Yamwise - "I'm Through" [Single]

*First single off my new "The Epiphany EP", due out within the next two weeks.
*Produced by the guy on the second verse whose production name is YamJamz. He also mixed it.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nkhbuJa5whU&feature=youtu.be
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[Verse 1: Eedee]
I'm the best in my town, the Godzilla of Wasilla
Flex and you frown, you got feelings, you are little
Next to the ground, walk with us and talk bitches
I feel death and it drowns, saw fishes and attention
Deficit, I'm next to it, talk shit and I'm hurt
My lyrics impact more than the Titanic and icebergs.
I'm quite certain too, those are nice curtains
Compared to you, fucker, I'm a gargantuan size person.
You're going soft and I flex, better drop to the deck
Cuz when it's all said and done, it's off with your neck.
That's just a front I put up to make sure I can't be touched
But all these fucking questions nag at me, the answers up.
So I lift up my chin and take a look in the sky
And somehow I feel a spirit looking down into my eyes
I feel there's a disguise and it slips and I'm exposed
But the trick that I have known leaves me quick and now I go

[Chorus: Eedee]
Everytime I go outside, I feel it closing in
Just going 'bout my life and Hell, I know it is
Gonna end sometime, what the hell can I do?
Everyone can die too, so fuck it all, I'm through. (x2)

[Verse 2: Eedee]
But when I tune out the noise, about the flavor of life
And with these dangerous eyes I scout the blanket of night.
And everyone around me seems like they're aggressive
I'm trying to get my point across twice in a message.
And I saw that you read it, but no reply was in order
I put in for a passport to fly for the border.
To jump start my career, as I fight off the fame
I'll need both of my hands so I hand the mic off to Yames.

[Verse 2: Yamwise]
Yo, I be, failing and failing, I'm fallin' asleep, you peep this,
Me and Eedee eat it, no eatin', better off at the deep end.
Preachers weepin', skies that'll leave you speechless,
But it's all just part of the way till the Reaper's got you thinkin'
I'm just sayin' that I gotta get away and
Fly to a better day before I rot and decay and
Sometimes things are simpler
When you start over again...

[Verse 3: Eedee]
A long time ago there was a man in his seat
Overlooking progress, he was managing me.
I was skinned to the bone like some cannibal meat,
But somehow I'm able still just to stand on my feet.
The table will break if the dancin' is free,
I promised me a diet but I flatten the deed.
My forest of hope's gone, savagin' trees
So long to the wrong road, hand me the keys.
I'm just a normal guy that you stab and I bleed,
This life I seem to live I never had in my dreams.
I'm learning to ride on, I land with a scream
I'm wrong to think the help will come; bandage my knees.
My breath's still numb, I'm havin' a leave,
From the distraction we call life and the cancer in me
Seems to damage the weak, now I'm travellin' seas
And my problems outnumber all the sand on a beach.

Sounds alright.

The mixing is pretty good.
Not a huge fan of the beat, though.

I think it sounds a bit too generic.

This is better than most I've done before. And this isn't even the best song on the EP.

nice