Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
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Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
MIXED BY MAT DEMAZ
*Produced by Adamack
*Third single from my upcoming mixtape PHOENIX
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[Verse 1: Eedee]
My face is a still frame...
Why am I still playing?
Sick of your ill ways...
Can't you see that I'm in pain?
I know we don't talk a lot but every time we do
feels like I'm trapped inside a fucking box.
I stalk, I walk the honest path,
motherfucker, calm your ass.
God damn it babe, what you did to me,
hurts worse than a first birth.
And what it is to see me begging with you to come back to me,
Instead you look up and bend your knees.
Will you ever breathe without hurting me to kingdom come?
You're my angel, and your will will be done.
Now every time my phone rings I think of you,
It chills me through and then it kills me too.
Moonshine, remember that nickname?
It kills me, cuz now I can't think straight.
I'm in a drunken state, man fuck this pain,
I feel this shit and it's underway.
Remember when we'd go outside?
Sit on the swing, now my heart's down-sized,
And my tears roll down and now my mouth's wide...
[Chorus: Mike Murdoch]
And I scream why...
Why did it have to end...?
With my heart broken, am I...
Just another old boyfriend?
That you claimed to never love..
[Verse 2: Eedee]
You got a boyfriend now, isn't that great?
Wait. I don't know where to go from here. This. Is... shit.
Look at me, my eyes all swoll,
I don't really know but time does toll.
It took it's toll on my body whole,
Fuck this man it's time to stroll
Away from my coffin, watch it collect dust,
Where's the God you said would protect us?
Did you lie? I don't know but we'll see in time,
I try to wipe my eyes so I can keep my pride.
I'm bleeding twice, once for every time you fucking took my life away
And Jordan... I've been hording these feelings back
Need to go forward it's time to say,
That my heart still beats for you, it kills me,
Will we ever see the light of day, but still we
go back and forth, you're across the country,
and just like that you thought you loved me?
I see that fucking smirk, think it's awfully funny?
Baby I got the money to come see you.
And I would because I still love you...
[Chorus]
[Verse 3: Eedee]
Everything I ever do will come back to this so...
It's no joke that my heart beats for you...
Baby won't you see me through?
Even though you feed me loops?
And you keep me hooked and by the looks of it, girl...
[Bridge: Mike Murdoch]
And I... I still love you, why...
Do I keep these feelings inside?
And tell everyone I'm fine, am I... still alive?
[Chorus]
*Produced by Adamack
*Third single from my upcoming mixtape PHOENIX
LoF
YouTube Link
[Verse 1: Eedee]
My face is a still frame...
Why am I still playing?
Sick of your ill ways...
Can't you see that I'm in pain?
I know we don't talk a lot but every time we do
feels like I'm trapped inside a fucking box.
I stalk, I walk the honest path,
motherfucker, calm your ass.
God damn it babe, what you did to me,
hurts worse than a first birth.
And what it is to see me begging with you to come back to me,
Instead you look up and bend your knees.
Will you ever breathe without hurting me to kingdom come?
You're my angel, and your will will be done.
Now every time my phone rings I think of you,
It chills me through and then it kills me too.
Moonshine, remember that nickname?
It kills me, cuz now I can't think straight.
I'm in a drunken state, man fuck this pain,
I feel this shit and it's underway.
Remember when we'd go outside?
Sit on the swing, now my heart's down-sized,
And my tears roll down and now my mouth's wide...
[Chorus: Mike Murdoch]
And I scream why...
Why did it have to end...?
With my heart broken, am I...
Just another old boyfriend?
That you claimed to never love..
[Verse 2: Eedee]
You got a boyfriend now, isn't that great?
Wait. I don't know where to go from here. This. Is... shit.
Look at me, my eyes all swoll,
I don't really know but time does toll.
It took it's toll on my body whole,
Fuck this man it's time to stroll
Away from my coffin, watch it collect dust,
Where's the God you said would protect us?
Did you lie? I don't know but we'll see in time,
I try to wipe my eyes so I can keep my pride.
I'm bleeding twice, once for every time you fucking took my life away
And Jordan... I've been hording these feelings back
Need to go forward it's time to say,
That my heart still beats for you, it kills me,
Will we ever see the light of day, but still we
go back and forth, you're across the country,
and just like that you thought you loved me?
I see that fucking smirk, think it's awfully funny?
Baby I got the money to come see you.
And I would because I still love you...
[Chorus]
[Verse 3: Eedee]
Everything I ever do will come back to this so...
It's no joke that my heart beats for you...
Baby won't you see me through?
Even though you feed me loops?
And you keep me hooked and by the looks of it, girl...
[Bridge: Mike Murdoch]
And I... I still love you, why...
Do I keep these feelings inside?
And tell everyone I'm fine, am I... still alive?
[Chorus]
Last edited by Eedee on Thu Jan 03, 2013 5:31 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Had to share what Eedee's experience was listening to his song ^ - I already posted feedback in TR but I'll post it here too -
Honestly, your rhyming is way too elementary on this track just like all your other songs, you need to step your pen game up... just kidding.
Lyrics were dope. You definitely painted a picture with them that is able to pull the listener into your emotions. "Sit on the swing, now my heart's down-sized,
And my tears roll down and now my mouth's wide..." - That line paints a really good picture IMO.
Flow.. Wow! You changed your flow up a lot on this track but it worked together really good. The best flow I've heard from you I think...
Delivery - It is one thing to write lyrics that are able to paint a picture and another thing to say the lyrics properly to convey your emotional state in the song. You did this really well. I don't think you could have done this better actually.
Chorus - This was sick and a big step up from the rough draft you initially sent me. Demaz did a great job mixing the whole track, especially the chorus. It sounds like something that was already on the beat when you downloaded it, not something that you recorded yourself in your own studio. It fits the beat really well.
Overall, this is one of you best tracks IMO. Keep it up, I'm pumped to hear the whole mixtape
Honestly, your rhyming is way too elementary on this track just like all your other songs, you need to step your pen game up... just kidding.
Lyrics were dope. You definitely painted a picture with them that is able to pull the listener into your emotions. "Sit on the swing, now my heart's down-sized,
And my tears roll down and now my mouth's wide..." - That line paints a really good picture IMO.
Flow.. Wow! You changed your flow up a lot on this track but it worked together really good. The best flow I've heard from you I think...
Delivery - It is one thing to write lyrics that are able to paint a picture and another thing to say the lyrics properly to convey your emotional state in the song. You did this really well. I don't think you could have done this better actually.
Chorus - This was sick and a big step up from the rough draft you initially sent me. Demaz did a great job mixing the whole track, especially the chorus. It sounds like something that was already on the beat when you downloaded it, not something that you recorded yourself in your own studio. It fits the beat really well.
Overall, this is one of you best tracks IMO. Keep it up, I'm pumped to hear the whole mixtape
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Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Really hard track to mix but I think I did alright.
Awesome lyrics and hook.
Awesome lyrics and hook.
Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
This is absolutely intense.
Can't believe how good this sounds.
Flow:
A bit off sometimes, but, it was mostly consistent.
Lyrics:
VERY intricate.
Emotional, powerful.
Mike is a awesome singer.
Nothing much to say; VERY good song.
Can't believe how good this sounds.
Flow:
A bit off sometimes, but, it was mostly consistent.
Lyrics:
VERY intricate.
Emotional, powerful.
Mike is a awesome singer.
Nothing much to say; VERY good song.
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Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Finally getting the good looks we've been wanting, Mat. Epic job on the mixing, you did great.
I'm genuinely happy with how this song turned out. It's getting love from everyone who's heard it so far.
I'm genuinely happy with how this song turned out. It's getting love from everyone who's heard it so far.
Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
sounds epic
I did notice eedee going off for brief seconds though
It really is hard mixing online
especially when the vocals are lined up manually
I did notice eedee going off for brief seconds though
It really is hard mixing online
especially when the vocals are lined up manually
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Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
What part are you talking about where I go off on flow?
Because I can see one or two parts where it could be an issue but I think it sounds, as Mat said to me, human.
Because I can see one or two parts where it could be an issue but I think it sounds, as Mat said to me, human.
Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Awesome track.
Nothing to really criticize other than the flow going a bit off in some parts.
It must of been a pain in the ass to mix this.
Good work, guys.
It's gonna be scary to listen to you guys when you're all in a studio together.
Nothing to really criticize other than the flow going a bit off in some parts.
It must of been a pain in the ass to mix this.
Good work, guys.
It's gonna be scary to listen to you guys when you're all in a studio together.
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Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Could you guys elaborate where you think the flow goes off at?
I have my suspicions as to where, but I'd like your input.
I have my suspicions as to where, but I'd like your input.
Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
awesome
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Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Another wonderful track.
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Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Wow, is that you?
That's fucking insane!
Got any other music?
That's fucking insane!
Got any other music?
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Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
I have SO many more songs yo.
Check out the rest of this section and my Reverb/YouTube page.
And yes, that's me, Eedee. My friend Mike is on the hook.
Check out the rest of this section and my Reverb/YouTube page.
And yes, that's me, Eedee. My friend Mike is on the hook.
Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Wow, this sounds really good.
The beat was a little bit too loud, imo.
Interesting lyrics and such.
That guy on the hook was ok.
Solid track.
The beat was a little bit too loud, imo.
Interesting lyrics and such.
That guy on the hook was ok.
Solid track.
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Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Cheers. Hope you enjoy the rest of the mixtape when it drops.
Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Epic song.
Can't wait to hear the final version.
Can't wait to hear the final version.
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Re: Eedee ft. Mike Murdoch - "I Still Love You" [Single]
Yep, Demaz changed the mixing a bit, it sounds better. It will be on the final version of Phoenix.
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