Eedee - Get Ready EP [Album]

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Eedee - Get Ready EP [Album]

Post by Eedee on Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:42 pm



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Featuring producer Rise From The Ashez, Eedee presents: Get Ready - The
EP. Hope you all enjoy! I'd appreciate some track by track reviews!



Reverbnation Page: http://www.reverbnation.com/eedee [You can download the tracks from this page, under the options.]
Facebook Page: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Eedee/270711676304398

(LYRICS IN THE VIDEO DESCRIPTIONS)

01. Get Ready
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bp-SIfMrIMo

02. Never
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQRcgku0FUI&feature=channel

03. Live Life
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UjAlozirc_0&feature=channel

04. Pictures
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NyUQIOLJoew&feature=channel

05. Evil Genius
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1AwA513GEXk&feature=channel

06. Echoes * (BONUS TRACK) (Beat from Worldhiphopbeats.com)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=za4nay9dEtE&feature=channel

Full YouTube Album Playlist
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLB82E1955F4347208&feature=plcp

Again,
thanks for listening and review is always welcome! And a special thanks
to Rise From The Ashez for allowing me to use his amazing beats.

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Re: Eedee - Get Ready EP [Album]

Post by FallenAngel on Mon Mar 19, 2012 11:06 pm

Before you read this review, just know that I'm a seasoned critic, I try to be as fair as possible.

1. Get Ready

Well, the beat sounds really wicked, I think your voice is a bit weak at times throughout the song, the hook is pretty bad, I feel like more could have been done to it to make it sound more appealing.
I dunno, I wasn't feeling the song because of your stock voice I guess.

Your lyrics were great, you just need to put more effort into your voice.
For what the song is, it's not bad, but you know.

2. Never

Hmm, ok, you hit the right vocal tones throughout the song here, but you still manage to slip under, it seems like your flow is all over the place, I find it hard to grasp where you are going with this track, it just seems to be random stuff.

I find it a bit hard to feel much of an atmosphere even though the beat is hypnotic.

Again, your voice sounds a bit stock.
To be fair, it is a cute track, but you need to put more effort into delivery and vocal tone.

3. Live Life

Pretty short, I guess it's ok for what it is.
I got nothing much to say about this, it's an interesting song.

4. Pictures

Ah, this is nice.
I like where you were going with the lyrics, I'm guessing this is one of those songs you wrote for a long time because the lyrics are technical.

Sadly, your vocals are pretty boring, I liked the layering, but it still sounds raw and stock.

5. Evil Genius

This track sounds awful, who mixed this shit?
Well, it is pretty funny I guess.
This song seems to sound different compared to the others.
Your flow is a bit awkward.

Not much I can say, it's pretty cute I guess.

6. Echoes (Bonus Track)

So yeah, this was ok, I liked some cool ways you delivered your vocals,
but sorry, overall, your vocals most of the time still sound stock as fuck.
Still listenable, but I wasn't really feeling it.

Overall, this is a cute album, I take it you were just fooling around, at least the microphone you were using has high quality, I'd rather listen to high quality condenser microphone vocals than desktop microphone shit.

Keep doing this shit man, you got a cool voice.

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Re: Eedee - Get Ready EP [Album]

Post by davidgarcia on Mon Mar 19, 2012 11:32 pm

I downloaded each track but the quality is terrible, I hate low quality MP3s!

Well anyway, here's my review.

1. Get Ready

I like your energy at the start of this track, but your delivery sounds really fucking boring when the song drags on.
It's like, you're rubbing your cock for a minute and you're about to cum, but you stop rubbing it.

3/5

2. Never

Horrid.
Your flow is all over the place, I couldn't even listen for a minute.
Sorry dude.

0/5

3. Live Life

This is ok I guess, but as you ramble on about nonsense, it gets fucking boring and I pressed stop halfway.
You seem to be just writing random shit.
To be fair, it's a bit decent on the second listen.
It's mellow.

2/5

4. Pictures

This is a massive improvement from the previous track.
Like Angel said, your lyrics are fucking brilliant on this track, they were soo fucking technical.
Why didn't you do this type of shit for each track?

4/5

5. Evil Genius

Horrible.
Well, ok, I smiled.

1/5

6. Echoes (Bonus Track)

Meh, fucking boring, sorry.
The hook is just terrible.

0/5

Overall, it was ok, but you have a horrible delivery in most of the songs and some of your lyrics make no sense.
These flaws handicap the album's overall message, the album is basically saying to me, "hey, I'm a random collection of songs!"

Well anyway, I guess your vocal quality is pretty good, you must of used a good microphone.

10 points out of 30 scores you 1.6/5 overall.

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Re: Eedee - Get Ready EP [Album]

Post by jasonking on Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:20 pm

1. Get Ready

Pretty cool, I'd go as far as saying that this is listenable, but your voice needs work.

2. Never

Awkward flow, but you still keep the song interesting.

3. Live Life

Pretty cool, It's a mellow track.

4. Pictures

Awesome track!
I loved the lyrics and concept.

5. Evil Genius

Funny as hell.

6. Echoes (Bonus Track)

This track is ok I guess.

Well, it was fun to listen to.
Demaz told me you recorded this in a day which is amazing, but I suggest you put more time into your craft dude.


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Re: Eedee - Get Ready EP [Album]

Post by Eedee on Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:51 pm

@ Fallen - Thank you for the honest review. I really appreciate you going all out with the critiques, it'll only make me better! Smile

@ David - Same to you. Thanks for the honesty.

@ Jason - Yeah, I didn't plan on recording 6 tracks actually, I wrote Evil Genius in the studio while they were cleaning up the other 5 tracks in post-production. Then spit it. I agree my delivery could've been better on all of them. I'm glad Pictures is the unanimous favorite on this EP - it's the most personal to me and my favorite as well.

Just a head's up, I have more beats from the same producer, I'm currently writing a new 5-6 track EP for you guys to see if I can improve on what I lacked: delivery, voice, flow and emotion. I'll also mess with the compression of my vocals to make them sound wetter, they did indeed sound a bit dry on here, I admit.

Anyway, thanks very much for the honesty, as I said, it'll only make me better, and hopefully I'll become that guy everyone talks about :P Have a good one, fellahs/ladies. Keep it real! Smile

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Re: Eedee - Get Ready EP [Album]

Post by jasonking on Wed Mar 21, 2012 8:20 pm

Keep us updated dude, I'm gonna keep my eye on you.

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Re: Eedee - Get Ready EP [Album]

Post by mdemaz on Wed Mar 21, 2012 8:21 pm

David being a faggot as usual.

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Re: Eedee - Get Ready EP [Album]

Post by davidgarcia on Wed Mar 21, 2012 8:23 pm

mdemaz wrote:David being a faggot as usual.

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